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Accordance by shelly crane
Accordance by shelly crane




(This isn’t an example from the book, but I think it gets my point across.) I love that Caleb basically told Maggie to cut it out every time she went to needlessly apologize. Like, don’t apologize for the rain when you’re not the reason it’s raining and you can’t stop the rain.

accordance by shelly crane

If you’re apologizing, then you better have made an actual mistake and be attempting to correct it. I hate it when people say “I’m sorry” for things they have no control over and things that they can’t fix. Caleb totally called Maggie out on her empty apologizes because of things she had no control over and things she couldn’t fix. Sorry Kaidan), Caleb totally won me over in this book when he acknowledged any annoying habit that Maggie developed, a habit that had me yelling at the book a number of times. (Shout into the void: Caleb, I love you! *Silence* It’s ok I still love you!) Aside from being my favorite book boyfriend at the moment (Sorry Daemon. *Insert dreamy sigh here* He’s always there for Maggie: helping her, protecting her, and making sure she’s happy. While I prefer having no errors in the books I read, I don’t mind a few because I have to account for human error, but when there’s a pattern to the errors, then I have a problem.Ĭaleb: Excuse me while I fangirl for a moment, but Caleb is amazing.

accordance by shelly crane

It’s as if whoever was editing Accordance wasn’t reading every chapter or wasn’t reading each chapter carefully so errors came through. The problem is that Crane would go chapters with good grammar and no errors, but then there’d be a chapter riddled with errors, a few more good chapters and then a chapter filled with errors. Grammar: For the most part the grammar in Accordance is fine, but it’s the few grouped errors that have led me to talk about it.






Accordance by shelly crane